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A Bewitched Legacy - Chapter 3.3[TEMP HIATUS]

PostPosted: June 20th, 2020, 4:39 pm
by Calamity Jade
Hello! This is a legacy story I've been working on for awhile. With SimNano coming up, my goal is to get three updates published within the next month, so I will try my best. Enjoy!

Generation One



Generation Two



Generation Three


Re: A Bewitched Legacy

PostPosted: June 21st, 2020, 2:40 pm
by graymondaysleep
Spoiler:
This is so incredibly good!! Your storytelling is amazing, I cannot wait to see how the story and legacy unfold!

I didn't recognise some of the names, only Calcifer and Sophie (because I do love HMC) so I'm guessing your using names from famous witches and wizards in media, right?

Also, Cornelia and Camilla are so gorgeous! I can't wait to see what Camilla's babies will look like :DDD

Re: A Bewitched Legacy

PostPosted: June 21st, 2020, 5:06 pm
by Calamity Jade
graymondaysleep wrote:
Spoiler:
This is so incredibly good!! Your storytelling is amazing, I cannot wait to see how the story and legacy unfold!

I didn't recognise some of the names, only Calcifer and Sophie (because I do love HMC) so I'm guessing your using names from famous witches and wizards in media, right?

Also, Cornelia and Camilla are so gorgeous! I can't wait to see what Camilla's babies will look like :DDD


Hey Gray, I appreciate the comments!

Spoiler:
I had that in mind originally with the names, but then I ran out of witchy names in my head, so I started naming them based on what I felt in the moment :) Calcifer lives up to his namesake BTW, he maxed cooking but still manages to burn food!

Haha, me too! Their genes were a good combination of both their parents.

Re: A Bewitched Legacy

PostPosted: June 23rd, 2020, 4:16 am
by peachy123uk
Spoiler:
sorry meant to post yesterday, loving the story.

Re: A Bewitched Legacy

PostPosted: June 23rd, 2020, 10:02 am
by Calamity Jade
peachy123uk wrote:
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sorry meant to post yesterday, loving the story.


Thank you, Peachy!

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 1st, 2020, 10:11 am
by Calamity Jade
The first part of Gen 3 is updated!

Chapter 3.1: Plots Abrewing

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 2nd, 2020, 3:15 pm
by ciyrose
All right, so I am starting from the beginning. We'll see how far I get with reading today. :D You are on my list now though.

Prologue
Spoiler:
I like Cordelia already, she's super cute. Hmm...lots of mystery and I love how you are writing all of this. It's quite fun to read. Yay for Remington being part of the family and that was quite a prologe. I like the story so far!


Chapter 1:
Spoiler:
The boys are adorable so far, too bad you've had 2 boys already. Oh boy and now aliens too. This is quite the update. :D
Yay for a girl, and she is adorable, of course! Wow, Penny grew up SUPER pretty. All the kids did so well as teens. Now to see how she does in college and beyond. :)


I'll be back for more later, it's really fun!

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 2nd, 2020, 3:34 pm
by Calamity Jade
ciyrose wrote:All right, so I am starting from the beginning. We'll see how far I get with reading today. :D You are on my list now though.

Prologue
Spoiler:
I like Cordelia already, she's super cute. Hmm...lots of mystery and I love how you are writing all of this. It's quite fun to read. Yay for Remington being part of the family and that was quite a prologe. I like the story so far!


Chapter 1:
Spoiler:
The boys are adorable so far, too bad you've had 2 boys already. Oh boy and now aliens too. This is quite the update. :D
Yay for a girl, and she is adorable, of course! Wow, Penny grew up SUPER pretty. All the kids did so well as teens. Now to see how she does in college and beyond. :)


I'll be back for more later, it's really fun!


Thanks for reading, Cindy!

Spoiler:
Glad you enjoy it so far. I'm glad the one kid with red hair turned out to be heiress, I wanted to have red hair in the family as long as possible. The alien baby was not ideal at all lmao, neither of the parents are family sims, but at least Sirius turned out cute. All in all, I liked how diverse Gen 2's personalities were.

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 3rd, 2020, 12:12 pm
by B. Scirocco
I've read your entries from start to finish, and I like what I see so far, so I thought I'd comment.

Spoiler:
Now I'm worried as to what Alcione has planned. Considering she was involved with the Grim Reaper, there's a lot of potential nastiness from that angle, but we'll have to see what she meant by ripping off the serpent's heads.
For a second there, when I saw that the Greek house placeholder was named Cara, I got nervous; that's what I get for not reading more closely. :duh:
Your sims are all so pretty; I can tell you gave their appearances a lot of attention.

Really looking forward to the next part! :)

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 3rd, 2020, 2:13 pm
by Calamity Jade
B. Scirocco wrote:I've read your entries from start to finish, and I like what I see so far, so I thought I'd comment.

Spoiler:
Now I'm worried as to what Alcione has planned. Considering she was involved with the Grim Reaper, there's a lot of potential nastiness from that angle, but we'll have to see what she meant by ripping off the serpent's heads.
For a second there, when I saw that the Greek house placeholder was named Cara, I got nervous; that's what I get for not reading more closely. :duh:
Your sims are all so pretty; I can tell you gave their appearances a lot of attention.

Really looking forward to the next part! :)


Thanks for commenting!

Spoiler:
Lol, I really hope no one else is confused by the two Caras, same with Cordelia and Cornelia.

I'm glad you think so, I tried to give each one a unique appearance.

All I can say is I have big plans for Alcione. :twisted:

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 7th, 2020, 11:52 am
by graymondaysleep
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DUN DUN! That cliffhanger tho!

I love seeing all the antics these kids get up to at college.

The squick factor at Renaud's confession. Let's hope Cornelia finds a nice young man somewhere else.


This is a great update! Thank you for sharing!

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.1 updated July 1st

PostPosted: July 7th, 2020, 12:11 pm
by Calamity Jade
graymondaysleep wrote:
Spoiler:
DUN DUN! That cliffhanger tho!

I love seeing all the antics these kids get up to at college.

The squick factor at Renaud's confession. Let's hope Cornelia finds a nice young man somewhere else.


This is a great update! Thank you for sharing!


Spoiler:
I wasn't intending for some of these dormies that appeared in the prologue to become plot-relevant later on. But I'm so glad they did hehe.


Thanks so much for your comment! :heartbeat:

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.2 updated July 13th

PostPosted: July 13th, 2020, 12:00 pm
by Calamity Jade
The latest update is here - Chapter 3.2: Unpopular Decisions

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.2 updated July 13th

PostPosted: July 27th, 2020, 2:46 pm
by captainmills
I just read all of this over the past two days. Huh...there seems to be a pattern with me binging your legacies.

Spoiler:
I was so glad to see Stella get her butt kicked. I was looking forward to Frida taking her down since they were children.

Cornelia and Camilla kind of look like a porcelain doll I had as a child. Hopefully they won't break as easily.

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.2 updated July 13th

PostPosted: July 27th, 2020, 5:01 pm
by Calamity Jade
captainmills wrote:I just read all of this over the past two days. Huh...there seems to be a pattern with me binging your legacies.

Spoiler:
I was so glad to see Stella get her butt kicked. I was looking forward to Frida taking her down since they were children.

Cornelia and Camilla kind of look like a porcelain doll I had as a child. Hopefully they won't break as easily.


Glad you've been enjoying my stories! This one takes much longer to write, but I have the next update almost ready.

Spoiler:
Me too! Stella and Frida's conflict pretty much wrote itself. I didn't really show it in the story but they were already getting in fights as children. I didn't even know kids COULD fight like that before then.

The twins have a ways to go before resolving their own issues, I can tell you that much.

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - 3.3 updated July 28th

PostPosted: July 28th, 2020, 2:58 pm
by Calamity Jade
Chapter 3.3 is live, which means I've successfully completed my SimNano goal!

Chapter 3.3: Trust to Hope

Re: A Bewitched Legacy - Chapter 3.3[TEMP HIATUS]

PostPosted: October 6th, 2020, 4:43 pm
by Calamity Jade
Just popping in to say this story isn't dead, but I've been preoccupied with other writing pursuits, namely fanfiction and NaNo. I do intend on getting back to this once I'm back in the simming mood. ^^