[BtwP] Black Widow Challenge (CANCELLED 24/04/20)

[LuckyDuck]

Apologies, but I've decided to stop writing the Black Widow Challenge story, since it's not the sort of challenge that really fits with my style of writing. I apologise for this, but I'd rather cancel it now that have a bunch of repetitive chapters. Thanks so much to 108sims and peachy123uk for reading what I wrote of it < 3

[peachy123uk]

Spoiler:

a nice twist on the black widow challenge. I like it

[graymondaysleep]

Spoiler:

Back at it again with the spine-chilling plots!

I can't believe Erwin got eaten! Ugh, that kind of creeped me out.

I like how unique this idea is!

Also, just a question. Do we ever see Oliver's face at all during the Introduced Species? I might have to re-read to find out.

Looking forward to more!

[LuckyDuck]

Spoiler:

Back at it again with the spine-chilling plots!

I can't believe Erwin got eaten! Ugh, that kind of creeped me out.

I like how unique this idea is!

Also, just a question. Do we ever see Oliver's face at all during the Introduced Species? I might have to re-read to find out.

Looking forward to more!

Spoiler:

There are occasions where you do see his face; it's just most of the talking shots focus on the other characters, so you don't see it very often.

Thanks for reading!

[108sims]

Spoiler:

YOU'RE A SNAKE OLLIE!

Ollie was just like screw everyone in Strangerville. I want POWER.

Erwin is invincible Ollie, he can pick fights if he wants to.

Love (hate) how Ollie just goes back to talking to Gaia. Like no big deal she just ate Erwin.

Ollie just has no morals or feelings or anything really. No big deal, just kill ten womenn. Cool.

[LuckyDuck]

Spoiler:

YOU'RE A SNAKE OLLIE!

Ollie was just like screw everyone in Strangerville. I want POWER.

Erwin is invincible Ollie, he can pick fights if he wants to.

Love (hate) how Ollie just goes back to talking to Gaia. Like no big deal she just ate Erwin.

Ollie just has no morals or feelings or anything really. No big deal, just kill ten womenn. Cool.

Thank you for reading! : 3

Spoiler:

YEAH Alt Universe Ollie is a tool. We'll see whether or not Gaia's messing with him will break him or not : P

[LuckyDuck]

New chapters are up!

• Chapter 1: On the Prowl
• Chapter 2: The Hunt Begins

[peachy123uk]

Spoiler:

no poor jess, and the poor daughter, what will the daughter make of Meredith.

[LuckyDuck]

Spoiler:

no poor jess, and the poor daughter, what will the daughter make of Meredith.

Thank you as always for your support < 3

Spoiler:

Yeah things are going to be tough for poor Christie, she's stuck with a guy and a girl she barely knows.

[108sims]

Spoiler:

Wow Ollie really upgraded the trailer!

Jess helped him too. You're so awful Ollie.

Controlling? Sound familiar Ollie? Maybe like you?

Well Ollie did kill Dylan and tried to kill Gaia. He deserves both of them haunting him.

I also just love the cursed lot trait.

Is Ollie going to feel some remorse about leaving Jess's kid an orphan, since y'know he was also an orphan once upon a time?

Get him Dylan!

Of course Ollie makes the trailer even more over the top.

Christie probably wants nothing to do with you because she knows you're a murderer Ollie! Kids are perceptive like that.

Aaand on to the next victim. Poor Jess! Ollie is stone cold.

[LuckyDuck]

Spoiler:

Wow Ollie really upgraded the trailer!

Jess helped him too. You're so awful Ollie.

Controlling? Sound familiar Ollie? Maybe like you?

Well Ollie did kill Dylan and tried to kill Gaia. He deserves both of them haunting him.

I also just love the cursed lot trait.

Is Ollie going to feel some remorse about leaving Jess's kid an orphan, since y'know he was also an orphan once upon a time?

Get him Dylan!

Of course Ollie makes the trailer even more over the top.

Christie probably wants nothing to do with you because she knows you're a murderer Ollie! Kids are perceptive like that.

Aaand on to the next victim. Poor Jess! Ollie is stone cold.

Thank you for your kindness as always < 3

Spoiler:

The pimped trailer is great fun! The Cursed lot trait is great fun, as is the Creepy Crawlie one XD And yeah exactly, it's the only reason he feels a sliver of remorse, because he was in her shoes once too. Yeah Dylan Sigworth walking out on her has given Christie a distrust in men, so she will probably be very distant to him- double so now that her mum's dead.

[LuckyDuck]

New chapter is up!
Chapter 3: Lone Pup

[LuckyDuck]

Two new chapters added!
• Chapter 4: Courtship
• Chapter 5: Whelping Date

[LuckyDuck]

New chapter is up!
• Chapter 6: Leaving the Den

[108sims]

So I'm dumb and apparently never subscribed to this, so I didn't know you had updated. Now for some catch up!

Spoiler:

Poor Meredith was dealt a bad hand in life as was Jess. I feel sorry for these women Ollie is targeting.

Ted and Ollie are both bad in different ways. Who knows what she saw in either of them.

That's one way to solve a problem.

Good for Dylan for forcing Ollie to relive the moment he murdered him.

It makes me both happy and sad that Christie is getting visits from her mother.

Christie seems to already have a rather traumatizing life before Ollie. Poor kid having to prepare herself for her parents not coming home.

Yes Ollie, once word of all your murders gets out you can just charm them with your cooking.

Oh trust me Ollie, I don't think it'll take them long to forget.

Well Ollie, Erwin is a ghost. I doubt you can mess with him more than you already have. Plus I keep thinking back to that picture of Erwin standing in the middle of flames and how he's indestructible.

Ollie is still Ollie at his core I guess. Ranting about news and politics and the like.

No Meredith, he isn't any better than Ted. Worse probably.

The plush bears next to the graves kind of creep me out.

Maybe she's getting attached because she's desperately longing for a parental figure that you keep taking from her Ollie?

Mark is reminding me of Icarus showing up half dressed.

Gaia probably is doing that on purpose because she hates you Ollie.

No Christie you should not feel safe with him.

Love Gaia caring more about the baby than Ollie.

Aliens are adorable! I am Leslie.

Ollie should be an actor because of how often he pretends to care.

The universe should turn against you because you're awful.

Gaia is becoming a great character in and of herself.

Wow, he can't even be bothered to name his own kid.

Christie should've used the machete while she had her chance.

Good, I'm glad both Christie and Arthur are safe. I doubt Ollie cares enough about them to go looking for them.

[peachy123uk]

Spoiler:

all caught up. I think it is good that Christie has left with Arthur, he probably won't remember he had two children at home anyways.

[LuckyDuck]

Spoiler:

all caught up. I think it is good that Christie has left with Arthur, he probably won't remember he had two children at home anyways.

So I'm dumb and apparently never subscribed to this, so I didn't know you had updated. Now for some catch up!

Spoiler:

Poor Meredith was dealt a bad hand in life as was Jess. I feel sorry for these women Ollie is targeting.
Ted and Ollie are both bad in different ways. Who knows what she saw in either of them.
That's one way to solve a problem.
Good for Dylan for forcing Ollie to relive the moment he murdered him.
It makes me both happy and sad that Christie is getting visits from her mother.
Christie seems to already have a rather traumatizing life before Ollie. Poor kid having to prepare herself for her parents not coming home.
Yes Ollie, once word of all your murders gets out you can just charm them with your cooking.
Oh trust me Ollie, I don't think it'll take them long to forget.
Well Ollie, Erwin is a ghost. I doubt you can mess with him more than you already have. Plus I keep thinking back to that picture of Erwin standing in the middle of flames and how he's indestructible.
Ollie is still Ollie at his core I guess. Ranting about news and politics and the like.
No Meredith, he isn't any better than Ted. Worse probably.
The plush bears next to the graves kind of creep me out.
Maybe she's getting attached because she's desperately longing for a parental figure that you keep taking from her Ollie?
Mark is reminding me of Icarus showing up half dressed.
Gaia probably is doing that on purpose because she hates you Ollie.
No Christie you should not feel safe with him.
Love Gaia caring more about the baby than Ollie.
Aliens are adorable! I am Leslie.
Ollie should be an actor because of how often he pretends to care.
The universe should turn against you because you're awful.
Gaia is becoming a great character in and of herself.
Wow, he can't even be bothered to name his own kid.
Christie should've used the machete while she had her chance.
Good, I'm glad both Christie and Arthur are safe. I doubt Ollie cares enough about them to go looking for them.

Thank you both as always, I always look forward to both your thoughts. < 3 < 3

Spoiler:

You're both right- the only thing Ollie is really worried about is the fact that someone may be onto him, and that's it. He only lightly sympathised with Christie because he too has been orphaned- except the difference with Christie, is that it was Ollie's own fault that happened to her.